First Impressions

It is a truth universally acknowledged that the first pages of a book can make or break it. Okay, maybe that's a little dramatic, but the idea is true. A book's first pages are its most important. It determines whether readers will continue to engage with it or put it down, not knowing if or when they'll pick it up again. Meaning authors have to nail their openings to keep readers' attention in a world where it can be taken by their phone, outside distractions, or another book.

But authors are too close to their stories to be able to view them objectively. This is why you need a unbiased opinion to identify your opening's strengths and areas for improvement. In this feedback review, you will receive a in-depth document accessing your opening in the following areas: it's narrative hook, character introduction, world-building & setting, pacing & flow, genre expectations, and whether or not I'm left wanting more. With this review, you will be able to level up your first pages and create an opening that readers can’t put down.

The one hour time slots are not a indication on how long the service will take. They are to control the number of available bookings allowed in a week. Prices are a flat fee. Please don't forget to fill out the form linked below to submit your book's information before you book with me.